At the shout, the world snaps back into focus, and almost without conscious
thought, Fitzjames's finger convulses on the trigger of his gun. By some
miracle, the shot fires nearly true, and the bullet strikes the beast in
the throat.
It howls again, but this time the sound is ragged, wheezing and wet, and
when it shakes itself in anger, dark blood goes everywhere.
Re: 2
At the shout, the world snaps back into focus, and almost without conscious thought, Fitzjames's finger convulses on the trigger of his gun. By some miracle, the shot fires nearly true, and the bullet strikes the beast in the throat.
It howls again, but this time the sound is ragged, wheezing and wet, and when it shakes itself in anger, dark blood goes everywhere.